Bad Vision is the
latest in the Hersham Horror Primal range of novellas. The series is into its
third year now and has produced some high quality books thus far. The first in
this year’s additions to the series comes from one of the good guys of the
horror community Dave Jeffery.
The story begins intriguingly with an interview in a police
station, pitching the reader straight into the narrative and introducing the
novella’s protagonist Ray Tonks who is admitting to the murder of his wife…
A dramatic opening then, and one which leads into the events
prior to Ray’s arrest via a series of extended flashbacks. These introduce the
story’s other protagonists, Ray’s wife Denise and his work colleagues Eloise
and Mike. Also introduced is the central conceit of the book, that Ray has an
ability to predict future events, a “gift” he obtained following a schoolyard injury
to his head.
Similarities then with The
Dead Zone and, as becomes more apparent as the story progresses, The Medusa Touch. The author
acknowledges the influence of the latter in his notes at the end of the book
but it’s credit to Dave that he’s taken a familiar, and well-used, trope and
created something new with it, something uniquely his own.
It’s the descriptions of Ray’s visions which provide some of
the most effective sequences in the book as he experiences ordeals such as
earthquakes and plane crashes as if he were there himself. If the horrors of
vicariously witnessing these scenes of death and destruction were not horrific
enough, things do get worse for Ray as the frequency and intensity of the
visions increase – occurring randomly and often inconveniently – and change
from what turn out to be real events to something more intangible, presenting
images of torture and horror in some unknown, hellish landscape.
Ray’s day job, as a Clinical Risk Manager in an NHS Trust
bears much resemblance to Dave’s own and his knowledge and expertise in the field
of mental health allows him to create a thoroughly authentic work environment
for his characters as well as fully realised back stories and histories for
them. His knowledge of mental health issues allows for a sensitive exploration
of them not just in the case of Ray – whose condition can surely classified as
such – but for the other characters too. The multifactorial nature of these
issues is presented here, nature and nurture both playing their part.
Not content with one storyline for the novella, Dave manages
to cram a couple of others in too. Ray’s wife is having an affair (the
description of a marriage in slow decline is very good indeed) and there’s also
the small matter of a serial killer – nicknamed the Frankenstein killer because
of their propensity to remove body parts from their victims – on the loose to
contend with too.
This storyline takes up much of the running time and, if I
have one criticism of the book, it’s that it possibly takes up too much. It is
very cleverly done, with plenty of twists and turns along the way but – even
though there are links to the main narrative – it perhaps distracts a little
too much from what for me was the stronger of the storylines. This sub-plot is
cleverly handled though, playing with the reader’s expectations and assumptions
and has a resolution that (ironically, given the theme of the book) you won’t
see coming.
The conclusion to Bad
Vision is excellent, the Ray Tonks who sits in the police interview room is
a man changed massively by his experiences. It’s a sequence which is extremely
powerful, presenting a whole raft of ideas and philosophical musings and it’s
something I wanted more of, and which I think could actually have benefitted
from being longer in order to give those ideas room to breathe.
Which all sounds a little critical. Which I guess it is –
but in a good way. I really enjoyed Bad
Vision, felt it brought something new and interesting to a well-worn trope.
These distractions aside, the writing here is assured and confident, with
convincingly drawn characters behaving realistically in a fast-paced plot. The
fragmented nature of the narrative is handled excellently by Dave and adds to
the reading experience, the twists and turns along the way playing with notions
of what’s real and what isn’t.
Bad Vision is a
fine addition to what is proving to be a fine series. A potent mix of psychological
and visceral horror, it’s a book I recommend highly.